tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.comments2017-01-16T20:18:19.576-08:00AUTHOR KING WILLIAMAuthorKingWilliamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05780603601929902303noreply@blogger.comBlogger52125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-12449508743345796772017-01-16T20:18:19.576-08:002017-01-16T20:18:19.576-08:00It was a movie👌👏📮It was a movie👌👏📮AuthorKingWilliamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05780603601929902303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-22452842742815285752017-01-16T20:17:08.223-08:002017-01-16T20:17:08.223-08:00Indeed it was sir...Indeed it was sir...AuthorKingWilliamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05780603601929902303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-79141117000296776112017-01-16T16:00:15.859-08:002017-01-16T16:00:15.859-08:00Looks like another successful day
Looks like another successful day<br /> Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06320213691908175112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-42124348598957620022016-06-15T19:15:50.618-07:002016-06-15T19:15:50.618-07:00Lookin forward to reading your latest. Ive read th...Lookin forward to reading your latest. Ive read the hell out of your othersAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06320213691908175112noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-91299323043778145952016-06-10T21:30:17.941-07:002016-06-10T21:30:17.941-07:00Wow, this breaks my heart reading this. It's s...Wow, this breaks my heart reading this. It's sad that people like Latasha Harlin are so soon forgotten. Amidst all if the chaos that went on and violence, this was one of many senseless acts that did not have to happen.This so well written though. I feel like I was in the store walking through the aisles, looking for a safe place! It took me back to scenes from the L.A.riots. History.Daehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01820547123069840898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-57321569503818768432015-08-28T21:52:12.575-07:002015-08-28T21:52:12.575-07:00I liked it, kept my attentionI liked it, kept my attentionJENNIFFERhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03268505783159289293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-27250975885967968742015-08-28T12:29:10.564-07:002015-08-28T12:29:10.564-07:00The storyline is good and very intriguing. Not sur...The storyline is good and very intriguing. Not sure if this is the rough draft, but with some good copy editing & proofreading it'll be awesome. Be careful of your factors though. A heart surgeon wouldn't perform arthroscopic or gynecological surgeries. Untamedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04740078249845873508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-75179569622665007992015-08-28T10:48:51.619-07:002015-08-28T10:48:51.619-07:00I like it and it kept my attention. It definitely ...I like it and it kept my attention. It definitely has a hook. Joy Elannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-36569974956978589522015-08-28T10:41:48.678-07:002015-08-28T10:41:48.678-07:00Wow!!!! This definitely had my interest from begin...Wow!!!! This definitely had my interest from beginning to the end... This passage alone deserves 5starsAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-37175965772216146992015-08-28T10:26:58.848-07:002015-08-28T10:26:58.848-07:00I like it! Love the title and I'm sure readers...I like it! Love the title and I'm sure readers will enjoy this book.mykishamachttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12159520431231704432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-18018574213438276732015-08-28T09:40:10.166-07:002015-08-28T09:40:10.166-07:00Leave your Reviews here.... Using your Google acco...Leave your Reviews here.... Using your Google account.. Thanks..AuthorKingWilliamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05780603601929902303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-6582167240416578862015-08-16T04:29:48.163-07:002015-08-16T04:29:48.163-07:00No errors in this chapter, that's for sure! &q...No errors in this chapter, that's for sure! "Millyon",She Be On It, She tell them lames to Boss up like this (in my Def Loaf voice) GREAT READ!! Can't wait to hear what's next for her, lookn to see her Dad n Mom ???Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17771902927199827434noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-34757253689426298542015-08-12T19:55:15.865-07:002015-08-12T19:55:15.865-07:00Great reading 👌 Great reading 👌 Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06202288754591313845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-50016439728838386832015-08-12T14:44:10.741-07:002015-08-12T14:44:10.741-07:00Very deep! Just a few grammatical errors that need...Very deep! Just a few grammatical errors that need to be tweaked but overall, I'm intrigued by this snippet.Krishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10681714741645066743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-7194924395524613922015-08-11T20:12:16.813-07:002015-08-11T20:12:16.813-07:00What a way for Bobby Ray to see more Good in highe...What a way for Bobby Ray to see more Good in higher power after 18 yrs but daaaamnnnnn, daaaamnnn, daaamnnn Ginaaaa! Locked up, and got a daughter!!! Wowwww!! GOOD READ!!!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17771902927199827434noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-27072365838509446162015-08-09T06:38:56.740-07:002015-08-09T06:38:56.740-07:00Thanks for sharing...read this is a rough draft so...Thanks for sharing...read this is a rough draft so I wanted to give some pointers. My English Major background always kicks in when reading, lol. Villainy is a noun, not an adjective or adverb. Villainous or villainously could be used. Ellipses (...) are 3 dots only. Please be careful of regional dialect. The word "cuzz" might be universal talk in your region but it's mostly viewed as a symbol of kinship. It's hard to redirect a reader's mind in one sentence especially when they start having sex. Just some food for thought. Hope this helps. Krisnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-50098572190740962472015-08-08T21:27:56.027-07:002015-08-08T21:27:56.027-07:00@vulyncia... I must say this is exactly why I need...@vulyncia... I must say this is exactly why I need these reviews.. And not that watered down shit... I wanna know what you liked... What you didn't like... What was good... What could be better.. Thank you for the brutal honesty.. Its honestly the only way I can perfect my craft... Also keep in mind these are ruff draft excerpts and have not been edited at all. But I will most definitely take a look at that from this point on and make sure that these grammatical errors don't make it past the editing process.. Or before it goes live!!! Thanks again!! #YouMakeMeBetterAuthorKingWilliamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05780603601929902303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-73871712809501825402015-08-08T20:54:27.380-07:002015-08-08T20:54:27.380-07:00Just gonna keep it real there are to many grammati...Just gonna keep it real there are to many grammatical errors making it a true turn off and me unable to enjoy and truly finish the read. Alot of he said she said when its not needed. I'm a book lover first and foremost and love supporting the art of writing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00832693536533167105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-54507816502665262782015-08-08T20:20:12.990-07:002015-08-08T20:20:12.990-07:00@sheri thanks for taking the time to check me out ...@sheri thanks for taking the time to check me out and leave some feedback<br />You are appreciated!!AuthorKingWilliamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05780603601929902303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-29676263800674677422015-08-08T20:08:51.687-07:002015-08-08T20:08:51.687-07:00Thanks for sharing the excerpt. Nice!Thanks for sharing the excerpt. Nice!SLY Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14468624172542146148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-85947840042095813822015-08-08T03:30:25.336-07:002015-08-08T03:30:25.336-07:00Thank u for the correction!!!! It's A-1!!Thank u for the correction!!!! It's A-1!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17771902927199827434noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-43175464365836857222015-08-08T03:23:00.887-07:002015-08-08T03:23:00.887-07:00#BookmobbLife#BookmobbLifeAuthorKingWilliamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05780603601929902303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-3249745568292087352015-08-08T03:17:08.196-07:002015-08-08T03:17:08.196-07:00Okay...okay!!!! Bobby Ray's something differen...Okay...okay!!!! Bobby Ray's something different n Lisa's kidnapping!!!! I didn't see this one coming at all!! Awaiting what's to come next!!! #BookMobb Lufe GOOD READS!!! A-1 Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17771902927199827434noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-66011860564882195202015-08-08T03:01:23.806-07:002015-08-08T03:01:23.806-07:00Please check out my new excerpt and leave a review...Please check out my new excerpt and leave a review!!AuthorKingWilliamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05780603601929902303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6391692582017659258.post-51251910773724093292015-08-06T11:39:36.661-07:002015-08-06T11:39:36.661-07:00It Keeps getting Interesting and Now the War has b...It Keeps getting Interesting and Now the War has begun between the rivals, but who was in the 3 cars shooting??? And who shoots up a funeral service?? zaaammmnnn!!! I can't wait to hear what's gonna happen!!! GOOD READ!!! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17771902927199827434noreply@blogger.com